*~Can't Stop Reading~* discussion

Here is the first chapter of my upcoming tween novel. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

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Synopsis: Jamie Blackshear is eleven. He has mind of his own, a horse for a best friend, and bullies all around making trouble at every turn.


Let me know what you think.


Lapo Melzi

Sounds real good so far. Could go into a formulaic direction if you're not careful. Not enough plot information to really judge but it has all the ingrediants for a book that tweens will like. Best of Luck. I'll want to read it.

Thank you, Richard. You're totally right and I hope I have taken care of that in the rest of the story. I will soon upload Chapter Two.