Status Updates From Moonflow

I really like it. The writing style is exactly what I like and it’s how I aspire to sound myself. It is motivating me to write again. I am highlighting descriptions & plot relevancies. I am underlining and defining the words I don’t know. I am absorbing way more of what happens and becoming attached when I’m only 3 chapters in.

7% in and I’m wondering if this is a DNF. And I don’t say that lightly. Something about the narration is off for me and distracting from the plot. Plot is ok so far so I’ll stick with it for now.