ngl I don't think I could care less about these two, in this book there's a lot more telling than showing, and it's just making it hard to connect with the characters. Also the pacing is kinda strange, I feel like the story doesn't hang on to or give closure to moments and events, they just kinda... end. it kinda reads like AO3 but like not in a good way 😬
also the motorsport inaccuracies are getting to me
— Sep 11, 2025 08:39PM
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