I'm enjoying the subject matter, but I've started to notice that the author sometimes uses rather long sentences, and it's annoying. These could easily be broken up into smaller ones, and the flow of the text would be easier to follow. There's also been a few times when the author has used an odd choice of words (for example, using the term "twilight of an era" to mean the time before the era started).
— Jul 05, 2022 08:52AM
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