I feel like this book needed an editor. Or just more direction. At the halfway point and I don’t care about either main character. I’m also confused about this book’s link to the original creepypasta of the same name. The original online story felt like it handled the story a lot better.
Still half the book to go, so maybe it’ll redeem itself in that time.
— Oct 29, 2025 08:48AM
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