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Points to note - lengthy, detailed descriptions of women, perfunctory descriptions of the men. Occasional ludicrous dialogue
"That's what I've got a wet room for. I'll be straight in and out. I packed last night."
"I love you, Tom."
That just didn't work. ;)
— Nov 07, 2016 05:16AM
"That's what I've got a wet room for. I'll be straight in and out. I packed last night."
"I love you, Tom."
That just didn't work. ;)
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Joan
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I am now being subjected to a lecture on the origins of the Lake District. Yes, author, you may well have spent hours researching this, or you may have a geology degree, but I really don't need to read it. I am afraid that I am going to skim through the rest of this book and then give it up as a bad lot.
— Nov 07, 2016 05:16AM
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'Mrs Standing,' he said. 'Thank you for agreeing to see us.'
She waved them towards the largest of the sofas.
'I wasn't aware that I had a choice. And please, I did ask you to call me Mrs Standing.'
I'm sorry ...' he began.
Editor anyone???
— Nov 07, 2016 05:05AM
She waved them towards the largest of the sofas.
'I wasn't aware that I had a choice. And please, I did ask you to call me Mrs Standing.'
I'm sorry ...' he began.
Editor anyone???
