Rose’s Reviews > Behind Frenemy Lines > Status Update

I have the physical book so I checked the prose and Charles’ pov for dialogue is diabolical. The short subjectless sentences are tolerable, but the CG: (dialogue) is Not Good

Missed opportunity, the worst should’ve happened

Some things i like, and I may rly not be the target audience, but almost every part of this book is a miss for me. I do like the conflict with Arthur and Kriya, w the element that Kriya is the breadwinner so she cant just tell him to shove it

I rly hope I start enjoying it soon