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Mohammed Arabey
is on page 488 of 1030

Now it start to feel "prolonged" a bit. Helena and Kaine slowly turning from enemy to romance taking long in sometimes kind of cliché events mostly predictable.. It's still good but in this flashback there's no mystery now and it's so far -after the twist few 100 pages ago- is just prolonged plot.
— Oct 31, 2025 03:55PM

Now it start to feel "prolonged" a bit. Helena and Kaine slowly turning from enemy to romance taking long in sometimes kind of cliché events mostly predictable.. It's still good but in this flashback there's no mystery now and it's so far -after the twist few 100 pages ago- is just prolonged plot.
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A very calm ending, kinda of an anti-climax. may be it meant to be so as the sad caption of the once happy photo says.
But after all it's a good story and the ending is still a feeling good one after all.
— Nov 06, 2025 04:13PM
But after all it's a good story and the ending is still a feeling good one after all.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 935 of 1030
Couldn't fast read as I began Part Three, the climax of the story... it's fast paced and exciting and can't wait to see how it will ends.
"Always. There aren't any exemption or expiration dates on always."
— Nov 05, 2025 06:39PM
"Always. There aren't any exemption or expiration dates on always."
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 845 of 1030
about 130 pages read today.

It's the last of Part Two, and it ends with emotional tragic events - although already known and established facts from the early beginning of the novel, but reading it how it happened is truly sad and exciting... couldn't let it off my hands.
Tomorrow is the last 160 pages so I guess another 3 hours.
— Nov 04, 2025 09:05PM

It's the last of Part Two, and it ends with emotional tragic events - although already known and established facts from the early beginning of the novel, but reading it how it happened is truly sad and exciting... couldn't let it off my hands.
Tomorrow is the last 160 pages so I guess another 3 hours.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 712 of 1030
More sex scenes as the romance part became more vivid as the war is on.
Hopefully Part Two is about to ends (the flashback) in about 130 pages. I can't wait for that to see how everything will be wrapped up.
— Nov 03, 2025 04:16PM
Hopefully Part Two is about to ends (the flashback) in about 130 pages. I can't wait for that to see how everything will be wrapped up.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 640 of 1030
The story finally get faster, the kind of unavoidable love making scene was decently written. and finally we get more into the motives of Kaine and understand him better.
Then a big war action scene for Luc and the Resistance including a rescue mission makes the plot fast now and that's good.
— Nov 02, 2025 04:44PM
Then a big war action scene for Luc and the Resistance including a rescue mission makes the plot fast now and that's good.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 518 of 1030
Finally half way through.
The War getting worst for the Paladia and finally too Helena asking Kaine why is he helping them.... it's a mystery so far really and with the currently prolong story it gets a bit boring. wish it move faster now.
— Nov 01, 2025 06:25PM
The War getting worst for the Paladia and finally too Helena asking Kaine why is he helping them.... it's a mystery so far really and with the currently prolong story it gets a bit boring. wish it move faster now.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 419 of 1030
A good story really so far . I start to feel how original it is with the vivid history. the war which is mentioned in the background of this flashback.
The detailed Alchemy and the kind of "magic" the characters have is well written. How the High Necromancer made the Undying people also interesting.
— Oct 30, 2025 04:40PM
The detailed Alchemy and the kind of "magic" the characters have is well written. How the High Necromancer made the Undying people also interesting.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 345 of 1030
So Part Two will be just the past, the years of the War.
Helena and Ferron have something like the "Occlumency" from Harry Potter... and a good twist in his past...
It's easy to see where the story will be heading now but I hope for more twists, after all when we got one about a main character just 30% into the novel so I must expect more to come.
It's goodread so far.
— Oct 29, 2025 01:58PM
Helena and Ferron have something like the "Occlumency" from Harry Potter... and a good twist in his past...
It's easy to see where the story will be heading now but I hope for more twists, after all when we got one about a main character just 30% into the novel so I must expect more to come.
It's goodread so far.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 290 of 1030
Part One of the novel ended with the inevitable, The "Child" making between Helena and Kaine.
It starts to be "cringe" a bit.... specially as they're in "Hermione and Draco" in my head.
Then by the end of this part suddenly too many names flooded as flash memories did in Helena's locked brain.
Then Part Two starts with 4 years flashback to know'em all.
PS: have to investigate the cool chapters' header symbols.
— Oct 28, 2025 01:09PM
It starts to be "cringe" a bit.... specially as they're in "Hermione and Draco" in my head.
Then by the end of this part suddenly too many names flooded as flash memories did in Helena's locked brain.
Then Part Two starts with 4 years flashback to know'em all.
PS: have to investigate the cool chapters' header symbols.
Mohammed Arabey
is on page 210 of 1030
Helena does her guess work and understand why the "High Necromancer/Voldemort" is making some "Undying". and apparently there's a Resistance member on loose and killing those Undying.
— Oct 27, 2025 04:16PM

