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So Thomas appears to be an "Anchor" (one of the entities that lives in Old House and seems to like trapping people there). Like, we saw from Allison's POV how he took over her family and erased her from it so everyone would think she was insane. And I think ATP he does the same to Eve, up to and including changing her name.

Shame I don't care about these characters and the docs are the only thing keeping me going...

Right now I'm mostly here for the interstitial documents. I'm not sure what to make of the main story. Sure the world is changing around Eve and that's creepy, but it's unclear if that's a creepy I fuck with or not.

Some writing advice I have been given is that when you finish a manuscript, lop off the first chapter and go from there (I myself lopped off a whole first act once). I think that happened here and right now I feel like it very much should not have. Part of horror is opening on things going normally and then slowly ramping up, no?

It's good that the interstitial document parts have fun little clues but I'm not quite clicking with the creepy family storyline at all.