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"She was nearly blinding to behold, for a blast of soft light had illuminated her from behind, gliding her edges as she moved easily through the storm."

I'm sorry but Alizeh is either giving Mary-Sue beauty or Cyrus is supremely unwell. why is this man whole body shutting down just looking at her? LOL I'm entertained, but it's so unserious

It’s feeling like Alizeh is Mary Sue levels of fine. Cyrus reminds me of that SpongeBob weenie hut juniors episode where Patrick kicked his own butt. Why is this man’s organs failing because she’s pretty??? 😂🙄

“Alizeh entered the hall and Cyrus nearly made a sound, something rough and desperate. He did his best to don a neutral aspect, but as she drew forward he lost control of his defenses; he was losing the strength even to stand. Indeed, the more he saw of her the more paralyzed he became, or else he might’ve backed away in self-defense.

He could not describe her beauty.”

i guess 🙄😂

a very unserious book indeed

This story is full of foolishness. If Alizeh were to kiss Cyrus, he might seriously in-universe die. just looking her at him had him raving like a lunatic