Lindsay’s Reviews > The Book of Azrael > Status Update

This is fucking atrocious. It's BORING with inconsistent characters (how they behave is dependent upon the scene), poor and confusing world building and horrificly bad writing. It's all tell- no show! Every scene is barely described and I don't care what 2007 club outfit these people are wearing!!!! Put some effort into your story ffs

With every passing chapter I hate this book more and more. It's SO poorly written.

This book has atrocious writing- its all telling no showing, repetitive and the FMC is a complete mary sue. The world building is weak.

This is off to a bad start. The writing is terrible.