Maddy’s Reviews > Julia Song Is Undateable > Status Update

okay here's my thing i'm so sorry. the dialogue is tripping me out. like real people don't talk like this, do they? am i not going out enough? and the second thing, i know it's a device to make the chemistry feel more real but the lusty thoughts when the characters look at each other is just...ugh! it feels lazy!! but i like this so far