Jayson’s Reviews > Hunches in Bunches > Status Update

Notes:
(1) In general, awful awkward, all hardly polished rhymes.
- It's fine, I guess, not laziness, though well past Seuss' prime.
- Just really clunky word choice, and inconsistent lengths.
- Seemingly so slapdash, showing scarcely any strengths.
(2) The gimmick's fun, but not quite tight, a loosey-goosey plot.
- This could be cool if finer tuned, and not so scattershot.