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The plot is compelling and I want to like it but so far feels like I’m being explained at rather than being immersed in. As if thesis takes precedence over story. I can’t separate the narrator from the author herself.
Pedantic and incongruent diction at times.
— 19 hours, 13 min ago
Pedantic and incongruent diction at times.
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