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Telling Tales by Christopher O'Halloran
It’s difficult to see the horror in this story, though I’d still read a longer version. Allie seems to have hyperacusis, and at its worst, it compels her to make two deadly decisions. The ending begs for more to follow.
— Mar 21, 2024 06:33PM
It’s difficult to see the horror in this story, though I’d still read a longer version. Allie seems to have hyperacusis, and at its worst, it compels her to make two deadly decisions. The ending begs for more to follow.
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Keekee Smith
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In Your Image by Kia Delmas
An interesting transformation story that leans a bit toward gross-out horror.
— Mar 26, 2024 06:23PM
An interesting transformation story that leans a bit toward gross-out horror.
Keekee Smith
is 85% done
The Resurrectionist by Bryan Young
I kept waiting for the scare but suspense and anticipation seemed to be the strongest elements at play. I did enjoy the flow of the short, as well as Young’s writing style.
— Mar 26, 2024 06:08PM
I kept waiting for the scare but suspense and anticipation seemed to be the strongest elements at play. I did enjoy the flow of the short, as well as Young’s writing style.
Keekee Smith
is 81% done
Within the Naga’s Coils by Rachel Searcey
I was expecting a little more from the title dealing with the naga, but it was overall a good story.
— Mar 26, 2024 05:05PM
I was expecting a little more from the title dealing with the naga, but it was overall a good story.
Keekee Smith
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As a person with a uterus, I adore the concept of it floating peacefully in a moonlit pool until I need it or becoming beautiful gems at the bottom of the pool if I don’t. A perfect summary of the way specifically cis-women are often ignorantly reduced to whether or not they can bear a child, their wants or well-being be damned. As John put it, “Without her womb, she is nothing, an empty specter with no purpose.”
— Mar 26, 2024 10:44AM
Keekee Smith
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World of Angel by Johnathan Heart
A fascinating concept that I feel could be endlessly explored. I failed to see the horror, but it enthralls me nonetheless.
— Mar 24, 2024 07:12PM
A fascinating concept that I feel could be endlessly explored. I failed to see the horror, but it enthralls me nonetheless.
Keekee Smith
is 61% done
Whole Again by Emma E. Murray
Oof. This one hit deep. Grief is such an insanely personal entity. It’s not a far stretch to say this could happen to any one of us. It’s truly a scary thought.
— Mar 24, 2024 03:55PM
Oof. This one hit deep. Grief is such an insanely personal entity. It’s not a far stretch to say this could happen to any one of us. It’s truly a scary thought.
Keekee Smith
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Intoxication by Lindsey Ragsdale
Despite a moment of soft gore, this story was sweet. I would read a series about Jake and Thalia. I didn’t find anything frightening, but it was a great read.
— Mar 24, 2024 01:26PM
Despite a moment of soft gore, this story was sweet. I would read a series about Jake and Thalia. I didn’t find anything frightening, but it was a great read.
Keekee Smith
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The Rotten Cradle by Demi-Louise Blackburn
I couldn’t get into the story and didn’t feel the horror. I wonder if it had been a longer piece if that would be remedied.
— Mar 23, 2024 05:17PM
I couldn’t get into the story and didn’t feel the horror. I wonder if it had been a longer piece if that would be remedied.
Keekee Smith
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Run Through the Pain by Taylor Ketterer
Whether by reality or hallucination, I doubt I’d ever have the grit to do what Sam did. It wasn’t horrifying, but it’s definitely a situation you wouldn’t want to find yourself in.
— Mar 23, 2024 11:55AM
Whether by reality or hallucination, I doubt I’d ever have the grit to do what Sam did. It wasn’t horrifying, but it’s definitely a situation you wouldn’t want to find yourself in.
Keekee Smith
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Deeper
By Bridget D. Brave
The horrifying aspect of this short for me is that I could believe someone would do this. The whole time I was reading this I was shaking my head. It’s a mix of disbelief, disgust, and dismay. By the end, I was utterly appalled. I’ll be thinking about this one for longer than I’d like to, that’s for sure.
— Mar 22, 2024 07:43PM
By Bridget D. Brave
The horrifying aspect of this short for me is that I could believe someone would do this. The whole time I was reading this I was shaking my head. It’s a mix of disbelief, disgust, and dismay. By the end, I was utterly appalled. I’ll be thinking about this one for longer than I’d like to, that’s for sure.

