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Clayton Cummings
is on page 214 of 264
I want to start writing reviews that are more critical than my past “5-stars for everything.”
With that in mind, this book is fun, but it has flaws. Around the 150 page make it became a little monotonous with its formula. There is A LOT of talking and telling, with little showing. The formula seems to be, describe something happening for half a page and have characters talk about it for 5-10 pages.
— Apr 15, 2024 09:44AM
With that in mind, this book is fun, but it has flaws. Around the 150 page make it became a little monotonous with its formula. There is A LOT of talking and telling, with little showing. The formula seems to be, describe something happening for half a page and have characters talk about it for 5-10 pages.
Clayton Cummings
is on page 136 of 264
A meeting of villains coinciding with a business/startup convention is fantastic.
— Apr 13, 2024 08:59AM
Clayton Cummings
is on page 120 of 264
So far the book has been pretty good! I’ve hit a few patches where the writing felt a little millennial, but I still enjoy the style. The cats are such a fun addition and the running of a villainous enterprise makes for some fun topics!
Good book so far, I’m tearing through it.
— Apr 13, 2024 08:28AM
Good book so far, I’m tearing through it.

