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I literally skipped like 10 pages and was EXACTLY where I left off in the plot. Nothing had progressed. And this was during a “stakeout/chase” scene! And I don’t get the chemistry of the MCs. They literally talk about how their sexual encounters are terrible. And they’re not written as anything great.
— Jul 12, 2024 07:33AM
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OMG I’m at 65% and it has been a real effort to get this far. I’ll finish on principle, but it’s not been a fun ride. It’s kind of disappointing too, because some of Nicky James’ books are my all time favorites. I don’t know what went wrong here. There is so much rambling. In fact, one character is even called out as a rambler who can’t “get to the point” but everyone is like that.
— Jul 12, 2024 07:31AM
