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Jun 20, 2016 04:35PM
You going out to see the rare solstice full moon tonight, Ashgar?
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oh, absolutely, Miriam :) Moon is so gorgeous these days or rather nights . As you must have guessed. This is about that rare event and about a certain girl.
oh no, that's not good. This summer solstice moon was rare as it coincided with the Strawberry Moon which happens only once in 70 years.
Yes, it was disappointing. And surprising, as it is 100 degrees here... wasn't expecting clouds all of a sudden.
This event left me bittersweet as well and full of yearning . If I was where I once were , there I had a terrace that allowed me to be bit more closer to the moon, if you will and full moons always felt so glorious and intimate there . And moonlight so balmy .
"Can you feel the Moon tonight?"Moon gravitates around the Earth, I gravitate around the moon.
This is poetry, I can read it out loud.
"You are only to look up, up up at him"
He's majestic.
"one look that lingers and he disrobes of his everything, all his glowing veneers. For you. He is but renowned for his shyness and for some parts of you."
Can't say that I feel the same.
"Silly Girl, who told you to remove your skin?"
"You protected him from all the suns and the stars in the skies" <3
"cannot take you back to where you belong"
But you can take it back.
"still cherish the sea of Galilee in your eyes that lights up the religion of your lie."
"the music of it feels right"
The music of this, it feels right.
You sure talk a lot about women.
Northern Lights and Moonlust. <3
"The Moonlust is on you Tonight, you'll writhe and write on the dunes of sands and then on heartless paper, too."
This is my favorite line.
"You should talk to him more often, seek him out"
"welcome the newer Deaths"
Resonant. I'm going to take a moment to know how I feel about this. My throat is dry. I'm struggling for words.
This was prophetic, it makes me smile. Should talk the moon more often than I already do. Thank you for giving it to the world. Thank you for giving us the moon back.
Safa wrote: ""Can you feel the Moon tonight?"Moon gravitates around the Earth, I gravitate around the moon.
This is poetry, I can read it out loud.
"You are only to look up, up up at him"
He's majestic.
"o..."
And thank you for reading it :) This is definitely one of my favorites.
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You sure talk a lot about women
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Haha, I do , don't I? Every writer writes in their own preferred genre, some invent new prose, I suspect this might be mine. Women, I think I am still Hemingwaying my way around this subject. Too bad, the subject matter is alive and breathing, but not sentient enough.
Safa wrote: ""This is poetry, I can read it out loud..."Such a weird coincidence -- I just made about the same comment on a different of Asghar's posts.
Asghar wrote: "Safa wrote: ""Can you feel the Moon tonight?"Moon gravitates around the Earth, I gravitate around the moon.
This is poetry, I can read it out loud.
"You are only to look up, up up at him"
He's ..."
Haha, I do , don't I? Every writer writes in their own preferred genre, some invent new prose, I suspect this might be mine. Women, I think I am still Hemingwaying my way around this subject. Too bad, the subject matter is alive and breathing, but not sentient enough.
Haha, may be. Yeah, one thing, vulnerability is a woman's undoing as well as her most powerful weapon, her strength.
Miriam wrote: "Safa wrote: ""This is poetry, I can read it out loud..."Such a weird coincidence -- I just made about the same comment on a different of Asghar's posts."
Haha. So I'm thinking that is it the writing or is it us. ;)
Miriam wrote: "You going out to see the rare solstice full moon tonight, Ashgar?"Superblood moon is happening again :) tonight 31th Jan
I can see the full moon through a window. Last night it was quite large (er, close, I guess that means) but no red from here. Today is foggy, but maybe it will clear.


