The Different Ways We Authors Hear Our Characters Speak

Have you ever been in a new situation or place and began to speak like the majority does? While I was in Turkey for a tech transfer project, I heard the Turks speak in a clipped, precise English they'd learned at their university. I must be something of a mime, because I soon caught myself using the same inflections, syntax, and rhythms that they employed while conversing.

Or, if you're from a different region, and you return there for a visit, it won't be long before you revert to the natives' drawl or lilt. We all want to fit in and not to sound funny when we speak is one of the ways we can do it. The same deal applies when authors write their characters' dialogue.

It might come off sounding stilted to some readers while others think it's spot on and believable. Of course, it's easy for authors to exaggerate the lingo and make it inaccessible or too dense to be understood by the readers. Noir and hardboiled genres have their own language that experienced readers and fans might have little or no trouble following while a new reader might give a thumbs down on after slogging through only a few pages.
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Published on February 22, 2013 11:03 Tags: amazon, e-readers, ed-lynskey, fiction, kindle, nook, reading, writing
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message 1: by Harv (new)

Harv Griffin Hey, Ed!

Wow, you really go "tag crazy" with your GoodReads posts! [amazon, e-readers, ed-lynskey, fiction, kindle, nook, reading, writing] Should I start mega-tagging my posts? Does that SEO effort glom extra views?

About character speech: You got me thinking. My personal bias is that "readability" has to be central; that whatever lilt or drawl or syntax must take a back-seat to mainstream comprehension. That's just me. And I'm sure there are exceptions. But for my recent Sci-Fi novel I had a grand scheme of feminized language that I had to dial way back, because I realized in the first draft that my text would be unreadable for most readers.

Because it is ultimately about "The Reader." If we, as writers, go to too far in verisimilitude, we may fail. Sometimes a hint may be enough. That's just me. Cheers! @hg47


message 2: by Ed (new)

Ed Harv wrote: "Hey, Ed!

Wow, you really go "tag crazy" with your GoodReads posts! [amazon, e-readers, ed-lynskey, fiction, kindle, nook, reading, writing] Should I start mega-tagging my posts? Does that SEO e..."


No idea about the tags, Harv. They seem to be used everywhere. Try them out. Anyway, dialectic speech isn't done nowadays. The last novel I read written like that was by Andrew Lytle. I finished it but only because I like his work. Thanks for the comments.


message 3: by sarg (last edited Feb 23, 2013 07:20AM) (new)

sarg I Suspect that I have an advantage as a senior of this society because I have had to use my imagination while I read. Before television one imagined the settings and characters of a story that we heard on the radio. I actually supply my characters and settings of stories that I read. When i read a hardboiled PI I set sceene the as a Bogart character my Westerns usually get a J Wayne type. and their tone and inflections of speach matches my imagined characters


message 4: by Ed (new)

Ed sarg wrote: "I Suspect that I have an advantage as a senior of this society because I have had to use my imagination while I read. Before television one imagined the settings and characters of a story that we ..."

Those old radio shows sound fun. I've heard parts of Orson Welles' War of the Worlds. Hard to believe radio had that much impact on society. Have a good one, Sarg.


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