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message 1: by Tim (new)

Tim Wonderful! I'd read more of that, in order to find out things like:

- Why did the golden children need to create a "fortress"? Who or what did they need to defend themselves against?

- How will you (the author) tackle the age old conundrum of an advanced AI having the spark of self awareness, yet seeming to be fully accepting of its subservient existence?

- "Children" with such almost limitless power could quickly lead to scenarios that simply defy explanation and run the risk of leaving the reader and the surrounding non-enhanced characters unable to make sense of it. Is Ru Shi an exceptional golden child who, because of her unique upbringing, is able to interpret for us?

I know comparison can come off as condescension, but none is implied when I say that I'm getting a lot of Akira and Ghost In The Machine vibes from this - in the best possible way.

Thank you for sharing!


message 2: by A.A. (new)

A.A. Attanasio Splendid - and insightful - commentary, Tim!

This story (or is it more of a vignette? maybe flash fiction?) raises a lot of questions I would like answered as well. The recent warnings about Artificial Intelligence from worried developers has inspired anxiety about the future of our species, and I tried to write an optimistic narrative about a friendly AI just to assuage my own foreboding. Only after I started to get to know the anthropic AI, Meemur, did I see that a kindly android required a future amiable to human beings. I, too, would like to know more about the cognitively-enhanced golden children and their management of global resources. If the future is ample and clever enough, I may well develop that story. Your encouragement is the seed!

Thank you for caring!


message 3: by Tim (new)

Tim Well as a veteran developer myself, I try to rest assured that what we are calling "AI" isn't deserving of the "I". It's just a really good prediction algorithm with access to everything it can hoover up through the internet (granted that's quite a lot). Novel reasoning and true creative leaps are simply not possible unless (until?) the technology breaks past what is likely to be a long plateau as corporations try their best to squeeze all they can from the current manifestation of "AI".

I hope you get more positive feedback on this piece, and I'll certainly be watching this space for updates! All the best.


message 4: by A.A. (new)

A.A. Attanasio Good point about AI's current lack of "novel reasoning" - and an excellent remedy for my anxiety about Artificial "Intelligence" extincting us. Now, I can more calmly return to my fantasy projects, confident that I can write about Merlin aging backward and dragons visiting Avalon without fear that ChatGPT will beat me to it!


message 5: by Tim (new)

Tim Ooo does that mean there's a new Camelot book brewing? :)


message 6: by A.A. (new)

A.A. Attanasio Yes! Dragon Perilous: Gestes of Love, the Wyrm, and the Dark Hunt on Avalon set 200 years after the fall of Camelot, with a much younger Merlin wayfaring Brythonic Britain, trying to atone for his tragic failure with Arthur. Not an AI in sight! ;)


message 7: by Tim (new)

Tim Sold!


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