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message 1: by Noor (new)

Noor Rivers Seeking beta readers for my contemporary romance/nature adventure story. The story is originally written with multiple explicit scenes. Tropes include: grumpy-sunshine, height difference, power dynamics, outdoor/exhibitionism. I'm interested in beta readers for both versions. For any Swifties out there, I aimed to write this like the book-version of the song Midnight Rain.

The longer NSFW version is about ~73K words. M/F vanilla, but LOTS of the vanilla!

I copied a query description below if you want more information:

If you find yourself being pulled out to sea in a riptide, you are supposed to swim out of the current. Trying to swim back to the beach will only exhaust you as unrelenting currents pull you out to sea.

Nova thought she was strong enough to outlast the tides that crashed against Maine’s famous Mount Desert Island. She is smart, modern, and fiercely independent, after all. After navigating the high-pressure world of Silicon Valley, Nova thought that a brief professional sojourn to the sleepy, semi-arctic island with a new business partner would be the break–escape–she needed. A respite, and an adventure, amid the misty Maine coastal spring. Until the delicious, liquid amber gaze of one young man threatens to alter Nova’s carefully constructed plans.

Nova’s life on the island quickly gets complicated. An island that old-money families like the Roosevelts and the Rockefellers used to make their personal playground is not likely to be a place open to change. Hidden under the boughs of maritime coastal forests and in the shadows of jagged granite cliffs, forces pull at the tiny towns dotting the island and its iconic Acadia National Park. And the mercurial charms of one local son make the warring tides all the harder for Nova to circumvent. Nova will need to navigate between holding her own in her new life, and accepting that, maybe, she might not need to be on her own, quite so much.


message 2: by Morgan (new)

Morgan Rush Sounds interesting!


message 3: by Noor (new)

Noor Rivers Morgan wrote: "Sounds interesting!"

Are interested in being a beta reader? Let me know and we can connect!


message 4: by Morgan (new)

Morgan Rush Hi Noor

I'm also writing Erotic Fiction.

https://www.morganrush.com/

If you're interested in doing a swap that would work. My current WIP is just about ready, 55k words.

Let me know!


message 5: by David (new)

David Thompson Hey, as a beta reader I can provide you with my honest feedback on characters, pace of the story, plot development and an overall impression. Keep in mind I would give you my honest opinion. Also my packages are pretty affordable for what they provide you with. I have a cheaper package that I'll read up to 25k words and It's just 20 dollars. My premium one, I'll read up to 100k words and it's just 65 dollars, what a bargain. We can always negotiate prices. I have a profile on Fiverr, where you can get to know me better and also see my reviews. I can also send you 2 of my works. In case you still have any doubt, you can email me: davidthompsonwriter@gmail.com or just add me on discord: davidthompson98 for more info.


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