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message 1: by Ramona Arnold (new)

Ramona Arnold I agree with Deb, as well. Though I am not a teacher, I had some serious training in language arts when attending school (one could say "old school").
My advice: polish, polish, polish.
Thanks!


message 2: by cat oas (new)

cat oas I agree 100%. I am also not a teacher, but I learned grammar in school. Please have someone edit your stories Mr Jace. It takes away the flow of the story from the readers perspective


message 3: by Kellie (new)

Kellie Totally agree.


message 4: by Cameron (new)

Cameron Jace wow. the internet...


message 5: by Sue (new)

Sue I gave up on this due to sloppy editing.


message 6: by Hannah (new)

Hannah I have no background in English at all but I read a lot and this was genuinely unreadable for me. Horribly edited


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