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Hi all,

I am happy to read and give feedback on any books excluding pure romance.
Feel free to get in touch :)

Hi Laura, I've just completed a 40,000 word erotic novella that needs an alpha reader.

Would you be available to review it?

Samantha.

I'm happy to help

Hello,
I have a (roughly) 70,000 word Christian fantasy novel that needs an alpha reader. If anyone is available to give me some feedback on it, please let me know.

Hi!

I am looking for a few alpha readers (1 or 2) who will provide honest feedback. I just received my development editing bac, but before I edit my novel, I would like to get feedback from readers to get their opinion as well.

I will have a checklist/questionnaire for you to glance over as you read to see if you agree or if you have other concerns/suggestions.

My novel, The Chronicle Keeper, is an action/adventure, with a mix of fantasy and a kindling romance. It is 50,000 words.

You can either respond back to this post, or you can private message me if interested.

Thanks!
Wren

Hello.

I have a contemporary family drama novel, and would love for someone to read it and provide some honest feedback.

I have never done this before, and the mere thought of it intimidates me. I've never shown anyone else my work before.

I would love to hear from anyone interested.

Thank you so much in advance.

Disclaimer: contains mild violence, instances of drug use (though not glorified), a lot of drinking, and bad language from the beginning; so it may not be to everyone's taste.

I’m a first-time writer that doesn’t know how to do anything! I have a 97k fantasy novel that I’ve been working on for awhile and I’m looking for an alpha reader. If you’re interested, could you please send me an email at abbey.larson11@icloud.com. My gratitudes :)

I am a first time author. I've written a 70k bully reverse harem.
I am looking an alpha reader to provide honest and critical feedback.
If you are interested please email me at rachelsmyth@hotmail.com
Many thanks :)

Hey guys! its me Ann here , im now working on my debut contemporary romance novel and its a fiction. Alpha readers needed to to read by current WIP ( 3 CHAPTERS). and im kind of stuck on my book deating on whther should i provide my readers a flash bkack of the characters life or to continue in the present and i am totally stuck on the sex scene too.

BLURB: Davis and Amanda are college sweet hearts , they have been married for 5 years. Their perfect love life comes to a crashing hault when they receive a news. On hearing this , they both are devastated. This is their story about how both of them cope up and build their remaining life on new promises & hopes.


Please note that i am a first time writer.

Hello! I'm looking for an alpha or two to help with what I'm hoping to turn into a novel. I'm a very amateur writer and could really use some unbiased help! I've only got the first chapter and a half done, about 5,000 words.
Thanks
Kayla

Hi Kayla!

I would be interested in reading for you! I read for several authors currently and I am looking at starting my own service. If you like my feedback I would appreciate you writing a testimonial I could use for my website when I get it up and running, if you don't mind.

Feel free to send what you have to bookcarereviews@gmail.com.

Kasandra :)

HI everyone .

I have written a YA book. I would appreciate anybody who would be able to read my book fallacious and give me some feedback.

Thank you 😊

Rabiah wrote: "HI everyone .

I have written a YA book. I would appreciate anybody who would be able to read my book fallacious and give me some feedback.

Thank you 😊"
Hi Rabiah,
I am interested and have some openings.
Can you tell me how many words is your manuscript and do you have a deadline you are working with?

Hi this is a bit more about the book with the word count and my deadline:

Aaira is the oldest child in an Asian household. She knows she has to be perfect. She knows she can’t make any mistakes. If she does, she will be punished. She knows the price. She had to pay for her mistakes. Aaira must hide from her past and her mistakes. She did the crime and now she has to pay the price. Nothing in life is simple nor is it free. If you make a mistake you pay. Simple.

Aaira is living a lie in Hertfordshire smiling to hide the pain and abuse disguised as love by her family. She is unable to tell anyone about it because she can’t be a bigger disgrace then she already is but when she meets Jays who helps her see she doesn’t need to live the lie she is in. She can escape from the darkness hiding in the corners of her life. Days of school and the trip to Italy make her emotions run wild. Even with Jays the shadows don’t leave her. At every turn where she sees light or happiness the darkness lurks behind her waiting to consume her and her happiness. As the sadness grows the amount of sleep she has decreases until her sleeping pills are the only thing keeping her going. Letting her sleep.

When Aaira finally believes in herself and finally thinks she can become happy that’s when the darkness explodes and now, she is faced with the reality of her secrets being exposed. will Jays be enough for her or will the secrets and darkness consume her.

The title of this book is Fallacious. The genre of the book is young adult fiction book completed at 7268 words with 41 chapters. I believe this book will appeal to fans of the book unspeakable by Abbie Rushton because both books have similar themes for example, the weight secretes can have.

My personal deadline is to have it completed by end of march/ start of April to have completed with edits. However, I am flexible if you need more time, I am happy to adjust my deadline.

Thank you. 😊

my email is bookishlybooky@gmail.com

Hello!
I am looking for an alpha reader to give me some feedback on my YA Fantasy novel, Ethereal; about a girl in Ireland who finds herself in the Faerie Realm one night and has to work to pay back a family debt she didn’t know about.
Please email me at authorlaraodelle@gmail.com if interested.

Thank you.
-Lara

Could anyone please read and review the first two chapters of my epic fantasy (mystery) fiction?

Hello everyone. My name is Christopher Kelly and I've just published a book which is available on Amazon.

The book is called No Turning Back, it's an action adventure/ fantasy story and I was wondering if anyone would be interested in taking a look at it and giving me their options on what they thought of the story, the characters and what type of audience I should promote it to.

If you wish to come contact me my email is cakelly31@yahoo.co.uk.

Thank you for your time.

Hey, I would love, if you check out my sci-fi, mystery novel (80k).

Synopsis: In a world run by robots, when newer model robots are made, the older models are thrown away like garbage. But Garbage needs to be discarded. So, the Nobles, the servers controlling the society, made Garbage Missions. Two friends Rex and Sabaton are struggling to survive. An opportunity comes to them that offers them new parts, but with a catch, among the thousands of robots, only one of them can get it. They accept this suicide mission to find a living human in the ruin of a tower. But little do they know that this mission is set up. Ancient mysteries lie within the tower, such as a living shadow, among others. They also meet an array of characters. Chinggis, the best ruin hunter, and a robot on a quest to take revenge on Rex for killing his "Brothers". Majnoon, the only other robot who shares a faith with Sabaton, but alas they are bound to clash for only one of them can get the reward. The tower also contains secrets from their pasts and also Zahra, and Chloe, whom they meet on their way. Will they succeed or be discarded like garbage?

Note: There are some horror elements, but I've kept them light, and few and far between. They are mostly related to dead robots, but there is no gore.

Just reply here, and I'll send you a copy

Hi. I'm Mary. I finished my debut novel and I'm looking for alpha readers.

Tropes: bad boy x good girl / grumpy x sunshine / friends to lovers / slow burn / he falls first and harder / tortured FMC
Word count: 117,000 words

I don't have the blurb right now, but I hope the list of tropes gives you an idea.

Mary wrote: "Hi. I'm Mary. I finished my debut novel and I'm looking for alpha readers.

Tropes: bad boy x good girl / grumpy x sunshine / friends to lovers / slow burn / he falls first and harder / tortured FM..."

Hi, Mary. I would be willing to be an alpha reader for you. Those are some of my favorite tropes. My email is katy@bookhoundediting.com.

-Katy

Hey, I'm a new author and I need your help! 📚 Looking for ARC (for my new book) and Beta and Alpha Readers for upcoming releases. Want to be the first to read and review it?
You can either fill out the google form: https://forms.gle/G7DTRjaSyugHAh5D6
Or contact me at authorsa.luna@gmail.com

Looking for Alpha Reader for 110k word fantasy book. If interested fill out form please :)

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FA...

Hi. I'm looking for alpha readers for my first draft of a fantasy-mystery-detective type of book with vampires, not in a modern setting. Features mature themes (nothing explicit as of now, thought there is mention of gore and violence), and LGBT themes! I'm looking for people who'd be in the target demographic for this kind of story. It's a little above 51k words and not finished yet. I'm looking to get some opinions on the story so far.

If this is something that interests you, please contact me at fdmedia1023@gmail.com
or fill out this form and I'll get in touch with you: https://forms.gle/9zWms7ix7k2g3UPB8

I'm new to writing fiction, but I have a draft of a book about Judas Iscariot. It's kind of historical fiction that verges into fantasy. It's 52,000 words and change.

Judas has become a cardboard villain for everyone to hiss at. The idea that he was pure evil in heart from the beginning makes no sense at all. In fact, it is unscriptural. Judas was included every time the gospels mention the disciples in general.

I have heard of any number of writings that try to make Judas out as some kind of hero or someone the gospels are very unfair to. I have examined some and find it hard to take them seriously.

The most common comment I find that has any merit is that Judas regretted what he did but never repented. That is a valid inference from the gospel record and very likely correct, but the Bible never says so explicitly. I wondered, what happens if I write a story that makes Judas into a real person, includes everything the Bible says about him either explicitly or implicitly, but infers instead that Judas did repent as he died? The gospel accounts do have some hints that point in that direction.

I would prefer readers with decent knowledge of the Bible.

I'm also new to Good Reads discussions. I assume that if you reply to this post, I will get an email about it and we can get in touch.

Hello! My name is Rowan Hanks, and I am a queer dark fantasy author! I have a book published called The Golden Gateway and it is first in the Gateway series. I'm looking for alpha readers for the second book in the series. It is a connected standalone, so the story makes sense alone, but it does have spoilers, so I would suggest only signing up if you have no plans to read my first book.

Blurb:
The Merr Siblings are known for betraying everyone around them- but each other. Jonan, Rayna, Valery, and Fynn are criminals, and damn good ones. They are as close as siblings can be, or so it seems from the outside. In reality, things are much more complicated. It only gets more complicated when Victoria Brooks, the leader of their country and someone they all dislike needs their help for a mission. Once there, they make bonds they shouldn’t, and get attached to people they know they must betray to get what they want. But when the time comes, who will they side with, each other, taking the selfish route, or will these criminal siblings finally show they are capable of change?

If you want to alpha read for me, please sign up using this Google form: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FA...

Hi!
I'm looking for Alpha readers for my memoir 'Being Camilla'. I've been a lookalike for our new queen for 13 years and have been working on my book for the last three. It's 60000 words but will be illustrated. Readers will need to respond to a few questions and fairly prompt feedback would be much appreciated. Many tyhanks for your interest!

Hello,
I'm Viorel, I have epilepsy and I last month I lost my seizure alert dog.
In summer when she got sick I have decided that even if I don't have experience I want to write a book about what we succeeded to do together and help fight agains the stigma of epilepsy.
I have never written a book so I'm new to it.
The first thing I am looking for is to find someone alpha readers that can help me look over a few chapters and give me a feedback related to the style, structure and the idea of the book
You can send me a message at mirea_viorel@yahoo.com or here.

Hello,

I'm Seema.
I'm looking for free alpha readers for my contemporary YA novel, Not The Same Without You. It's currently in the rewriting stage, and I would like feedback along the way on what to improve on as I'm writing it.
If interested, please email me at seemaforever28@gmail.com or message me here.
Thanks!

Hi! I'm Lyssi and I'm a first time author! I'm looking for alpha readers to kindly help me in my dark romantasy. Four main characters, set in third person POV, shadow daddies, asian mythologe (loosely, as this is set in a new world, so the legend is different than in real life) and a moody, morally gray FMC.

My email is carriggaalyssia@gmail.com. Please email if interested!!!

Hello I am looking for a few alpha readers for my first book. I am currently only 20 chapters in, but I am looking for some nice feedback and to see if my writing even resonates with anyone. It is a MM romance, friends to lovers set in NHL. Though it is a hockey romance, its not about the hockey and its just the setting and background for these two characters. This is a single 1st person POV story, with a lot of yearning and spiraling over being in love with his best friend.

If you are interested please send me an email at: h.e.deckerbooks@gmail.com