Hey Leslie, thanks for the feedback. I should mention that Jake et al know HeBak is a spy and they have used him in the past to pass along bad information. they also monitor his communications. In this case they have no solid info the weapons are coming from the aliens or other sources. Your point to me in all this is I need to do a better job of reminding readers of past storyline issues and enforce the issues during the tale. Thanks! :)
I should mention that Jake et al know HeBak is a spy and they have used him in the past to pass along bad information. they also monitor his communications. In this case they have no solid info the weapons are coming from the aliens or other sources.
Your point to me in all this is I need to do a better job of reminding readers of past storyline issues and enforce the issues during the tale.
Thanks! :)