Lizz’s review of Blood Jade (Phoenix Hoard, #2) > Likes and Comments
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I read them all =) thanks for your comments and taking the time to read.
Ken wrote: "I read them all =) thanks for your comments and taking the time to read."
Hello! I genuinely enjoyed your book and am looking forward to the 3rd. I didn't mean to sound so arrogant (even though my comments do come off horribly!). I was very tired when I wrote it.
What I was trying to get across is that I thought that some of the side characters could have been combined -- Emiko's brother's friends, the household staff -- and that I wished for more interactions between different important characters (such as a confrontation between Emiko's mom/dad/brother and the cousin). But also, it's your book! Pay me no mind.
If I could just ask for one thing... please more Freddy in the last book (just because I got very attached).
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I read them all =) thanks for your comments and taking the time to read.
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Ken wrote: "I read them all =) thanks for your comments and taking the time to read."Hello! I genuinely enjoyed your book and am looking forward to the 3rd. I didn't mean to sound so arrogant (even though my comments do come off horribly!). I was very tired when I wrote it.
What I was trying to get across is that I thought that some of the side characters could have been combined -- Emiko's brother's friends, the household staff -- and that I wished for more interactions between different important characters (such as a confrontation between Emiko's mom/dad/brother and the cousin). But also, it's your book! Pay me no mind.
If I could just ask for one thing... please more Freddy in the last book (just because I got very attached).
