Maria, I agree I could've made the story shorter, but just out of curiosity, what do you think I should have scrapped?
"Evil is something that we, as humans, are all capable of." Yes! This was one of the messages I was trying to tell with the book. Everyone thinks they're the good guys, but they're all doing evil things in the eyes of someone.
I'm sorry you didn't like the storytelling and plot, but glad the characters made this worthwhile! Thank you for rounding up to 4 stars instead of rounding down to 3. I appreciate it <3.
"Evil is something that we, as humans, are all capable of." Yes! This was one of the messages I was trying to tell with the book. Everyone thinks they're the good guys, but they're all doing evil things in the eyes of someone.
I'm sorry you didn't like the storytelling and plot, but glad the characters made this worthwhile! Thank you for rounding up to 4 stars instead of rounding down to 3. I appreciate it <3.