Chelsea’s review of The Pudding Lane Witch > Likes and Comments
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trice wrote: "lolololol"
This book is proof not everyone should write a book 🤭🤭 as much as I'm sure their were raging hot DILFS in the 17th century. THAT AIN'T THE VIBE omg hahahahahah
Ummmm yeah…. That’s a choice. Can’t say I’ve ever read a historical fiction novel and thought “this is really missing more discussion about dilfs”…
Yep!! That would make drop the book just as fast
Evie wrote: "Ummmm yeah…. That’s a choice. Can’t say I’ve ever read a historical fiction novel and thought “this is really missing more discussion about dilfs”…"
HONESTLY! A choice was made.... an incorrect choice if I say so myself 🤭 the whole “this is really missing more discussion about dilfs” SO TRUE!!!! MADE ME LAUGH SO MUCH hahahahaha you know what this 17th century story needs... DILFS 🤣🤣🤣
Tare wrote: "Omg "
omg it was hideous already babes hahahaha and after reading the other reviews, I regret nothing 🤣🤣🤣
Jayden H 🍉 wrote: "Yep!! That would make drop the book just as fast"
RIGHT!? I'm glad you agree hehehehe. This has got to be my quickest dnf in history 🤣, like be so fucking fr book. There is a time and place for 'dilf' and it's not 17th century witches, that's for sure hahahahah 🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣 wasn't it maybe used like in The Lightning Struck Heart? where they call the hot king a KILF😩😂 honestly I was surprised you're reading a MF book in the first place lmfaoo
len ❀ wrote: "huh"
I simply can not put my mental health through a book with that language right now hahahahaha 😂😂😂
Smutty wrote: ""
is there a comment here I can't see it!? AM I BLIND!? what is going on GR 😂😂😂 hello smutty ehhehe
HAHAHAHA I cant not the dilf term being used in the 17th century 😂😂😂😂😂
Reem wrote: "🤣🤣🤣🤣 wasn't it maybe used like in The Lightning Struck Heart? where they call the hot king a KILF😩😂 honestly I was surprised you're reading a MF book in the first place lmfaoo"
Babe, if it was all fun and quirky like lightning heart, I could have gotten behind it but this bitches mum got murdered/burned at the stake on like page 1, and she barely even cared hahahah. so the dilf comment was suuuuuuuuper weird and didn't fit into the time piece like lightning heart did hahahahahah 😂😂😂
And I was trying soemthing different :P I read the occassional MF.... I regret EVERYTHING. Back to my comfortable hole of mm I go... ahhahahahah 🤭🤭🤭
hope wrote: "HAHAHAHA I cant not the dilf term being used in the 17th century 😂😂😂😂😂"
My friend said maybe they invented the term in the 17th century in this universe.......???? I did not appreciate that sort of positivity 😂 hahahaha kidding, but it WAS SO WEIRD HOPE. WHY DO DILFS EXIST IN THIS TALE??????? ahahhahahaha gtfoooooooooo 😂😂😂😂 So unnecessary
I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the word themselves haha
lol, did they really? DILF? 17th century is very modern, indeed.
A.W. wrote: "I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the word themselves haha"
The word DILF sure has caused a dilemma 😂 it felt very out of place for the time period chosen, even if the characters themselves don't say it later, that almost makes it's first/only appearance of the word even more of a strange choice?
I'm honestly very sorry if this has upset you, I just always have to be honest in how I feel, and in the right circumstances/stories, this modern writing may have worked, but it was janky in it's use here. Honest beta readers is integral to this and I can see alot of other reviews on a similar wave length about the language and possible re-editing/tweaking to make the story more enjoyable. Best of luck with your future writing! The covers are STUNNINGGGGGGGGGGGG and I hope your books bring people joy 💖💖💖💖
Sandra wrote: "lol, did they really? DILF? 17th century is very modern, indeed."
Yep, the DILF was a real thing that happened 😂😂 I could have handled like... it not being completely time period accurate, but DILF??? hmmm no. much tooooo modern for the fact they were burning witches at the stake also. hahaha.
Gaby wrote: "OMG I can't even hahahhahahhahahhaa"
I can't deal babes 👀👀👀
Chelsea wrote: "A.W. wrote: "I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the word themselves h..."
you are super nice in how you reacted to the actual author commenting on your review.
Sandra wrote: "Chelsea wrote: "A.W. wrote: "I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the w..."
I hope so!! I tried to be nice, I didn't wanna upset them any more🥹🥹 and my heart is really big and I feel really bad, but I do wish them the best and hope they find some honest humans to push their writing to the next level! 🥹🥹💖
Removed from my WANT TO READ for the use of the word dilf😅😅
Gabby wrote: "Removed from my WANT TO READ for the use of the word dilf😅😅"
It was so random babes 😅 I just want my 17th century stories to be realistic and not to have any dilfs. hahahahahahaha 🥹💖
Hetty GIFs for the win. Sorry this sucked so bad. Moving onwards and upwards!!
Meags wrote: "Hetty GIFs for the win. Sorry this sucked so bad. Moving onwards and upwards!!"
I literally just downloaded the show so I could watch it because I found these gifs!!! ahahhaahaha SO GOOD!
And yes exactly, on to bigger and better books with no more dilfs! ehhehehehe 💖💖💖
why can’t authors stick to the time period they’ve set their books in and use terms relevant to that era 😭😭 i get why you were annoyed LOL i hope your next read is much better though!! 💕
lila ⋆ wrote: "why can’t authors stick to the time period they’ve set their books in and use terms relevant to that era 😭😭 i get why you were annoyed LOL i hope your next read is much better though!! 💕"
RIGHT!? It was such an odd juxtaposition between the theme and the language. Or if you're going modern language, do a modern retelling that fits the writing?? That could have been cooler for sure! omg. Thank you lovely! On to other reads heheheh 💖💖 I hope your reading something wonderful!! heheheh 💖
Abbrosy wrote: "Yeah this was painful haha"
It makes me so happy that i'm not alone in my feelings!!!!! thank you! I appreciate you hahahaha 💖💖💖💖💖
Teru wrote: "That certainly IS a choice xDD "
RIGHT!? A choice was certainly made!!! 😅😅😅
tbf, the term DILF is always a definite choice that kinda slaps me out of a story. It's just so..nooooo
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trice wrote: "lolololol"This book is proof not everyone should write a book 🤭🤭 as much as I'm sure their were raging hot DILFS in the 17th century. THAT AIN'T THE VIBE omg hahahahahah
Ummmm yeah…. That’s a choice. Can’t say I’ve ever read a historical fiction novel and thought “this is really missing more discussion about dilfs”…
Yep!! That would make drop the book just as fast
Evie wrote: "Ummmm yeah…. That’s a choice. Can’t say I’ve ever read a historical fiction novel and thought “this is really missing more discussion about dilfs”…"HONESTLY! A choice was made.... an incorrect choice if I say so myself 🤭 the whole “this is really missing more discussion about dilfs” SO TRUE!!!! MADE ME LAUGH SO MUCH hahahahaha you know what this 17th century story needs... DILFS 🤣🤣🤣
Tare wrote: "Omg "omg it was hideous already babes hahahaha and after reading the other reviews, I regret nothing 🤣🤣🤣
Jayden H 🍉 wrote: "Yep!! That would make drop the book just as fast"RIGHT!? I'm glad you agree hehehehe. This has got to be my quickest dnf in history 🤣, like be so fucking fr book. There is a time and place for 'dilf' and it's not 17th century witches, that's for sure hahahahah 🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣 wasn't it maybe used like in The Lightning Struck Heart? where they call the hot king a KILF😩😂 honestly I was surprised you're reading a MF book in the first place lmfaoo
len ❀ wrote: "huh"I simply can not put my mental health through a book with that language right now hahahahaha 😂😂😂
Smutty wrote: ""is there a comment here I can't see it!? AM I BLIND!? what is going on GR 😂😂😂 hello smutty ehhehe
HAHAHAHA I cant not the dilf term being used in the 17th century 😂😂😂😂😂
Reem wrote: "🤣🤣🤣🤣 wasn't it maybe used like in The Lightning Struck Heart? where they call the hot king a KILF😩😂 honestly I was surprised you're reading a MF book in the first place lmfaoo"Babe, if it was all fun and quirky like lightning heart, I could have gotten behind it but this bitches mum got murdered/burned at the stake on like page 1, and she barely even cared hahahah. so the dilf comment was suuuuuuuuper weird and didn't fit into the time piece like lightning heart did hahahahahah 😂😂😂
And I was trying soemthing different :P I read the occassional MF.... I regret EVERYTHING. Back to my comfortable hole of mm I go... ahhahahahah 🤭🤭🤭
hope wrote: "HAHAHAHA I cant not the dilf term being used in the 17th century 😂😂😂😂😂"My friend said maybe they invented the term in the 17th century in this universe.......???? I did not appreciate that sort of positivity 😂 hahahaha kidding, but it WAS SO WEIRD HOPE. WHY DO DILFS EXIST IN THIS TALE??????? ahahhahahaha gtfoooooooooo 😂😂😂😂 So unnecessary
I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the word themselves haha
lol, did they really? DILF? 17th century is very modern, indeed.
A.W. wrote: "I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the word themselves haha"The word DILF sure has caused a dilemma 😂 it felt very out of place for the time period chosen, even if the characters themselves don't say it later, that almost makes it's first/only appearance of the word even more of a strange choice?
I'm honestly very sorry if this has upset you, I just always have to be honest in how I feel, and in the right circumstances/stories, this modern writing may have worked, but it was janky in it's use here. Honest beta readers is integral to this and I can see alot of other reviews on a similar wave length about the language and possible re-editing/tweaking to make the story more enjoyable. Best of luck with your future writing! The covers are STUNNINGGGGGGGGGGGG and I hope your books bring people joy 💖💖💖💖
Sandra wrote: "lol, did they really? DILF? 17th century is very modern, indeed."Yep, the DILF was a real thing that happened 😂😂 I could have handled like... it not being completely time period accurate, but DILF??? hmmm no. much tooooo modern for the fact they were burning witches at the stake also. hahaha.
Gaby wrote: "OMG I can't even hahahhahahhahahhaa"I can't deal babes 👀👀👀
Chelsea wrote: "A.W. wrote: "I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the word themselves h..."you are super nice in how you reacted to the actual author commenting on your review.
Sandra wrote: "Chelsea wrote: "A.W. wrote: "I didn't think a dilf could cause this much drama. It's literally used that one time as a lighthearted way of describing the dad. It's not like the characters use the w..."I hope so!! I tried to be nice, I didn't wanna upset them any more🥹🥹 and my heart is really big and I feel really bad, but I do wish them the best and hope they find some honest humans to push their writing to the next level! 🥹🥹💖
Removed from my WANT TO READ for the use of the word dilf😅😅
Gabby wrote: "Removed from my WANT TO READ for the use of the word dilf😅😅"It was so random babes 😅 I just want my 17th century stories to be realistic and not to have any dilfs. hahahahahahaha 🥹💖
Hetty GIFs for the win. Sorry this sucked so bad. Moving onwards and upwards!!
Meags wrote: "Hetty GIFs for the win. Sorry this sucked so bad. Moving onwards and upwards!!"I literally just downloaded the show so I could watch it because I found these gifs!!! ahahhaahaha SO GOOD!
And yes exactly, on to bigger and better books with no more dilfs! ehhehehehe 💖💖💖
why can’t authors stick to the time period they’ve set their books in and use terms relevant to that era 😭😭 i get why you were annoyed LOL i hope your next read is much better though!! 💕
lila ⋆ wrote: "why can’t authors stick to the time period they’ve set their books in and use terms relevant to that era 😭😭 i get why you were annoyed LOL i hope your next read is much better though!! 💕"RIGHT!? It was such an odd juxtaposition between the theme and the language. Or if you're going modern language, do a modern retelling that fits the writing?? That could have been cooler for sure! omg. Thank you lovely! On to other reads heheheh 💖💖 I hope your reading something wonderful!! heheheh 💖
Abbrosy wrote: "Yeah this was painful haha"It makes me so happy that i'm not alone in my feelings!!!!! thank you! I appreciate you hahahaha 💖💖💖💖💖
Teru wrote: "That certainly IS a choice xDD "RIGHT!? A choice was certainly made!!! 😅😅😅
tbf, the term DILF is always a definite choice that kinda slaps me out of a story. It's just so..nooooo
