Griffin Mage #2: Back Cover Copy > Likes and Comments

I had a whole thing written up on the first one but didn't get to send it along.

Good that you included Tehre.

The newfound freedom bugged me last time, less so this time.

I'd omit blazing, but anyway, and maybe try firestorm at the closing...

Thanks! I'll finalize it today so I can let the cover artist know what to put on the paperback cover ... and then I'll tackle this again for book three ...

Rachel wrote: "Thanks! I'll finalize it today so I can let the cover artist know what to put on the paperback cover ... and then I'll tackle this again for book three ..."

Welcome! Good luck.

And now "than in battle" looks perfectly normal. Bah. But I think the first time round I wondered how interested she was in battle. Like she's really interested in bridges, but only mildly interested in battle.

I reversed the clauses as you suggested. That works just fine.