Bec’s review of Dancing in the Dark > Likes and Comments

Hi Bec,

Thank you so much for taking the time to share such detailed feedback on my book. I have to admit, reading your review was initially a bit heartbreaking for me because I poured so much time and effort into the story. However, I’m genuinely grateful that you’ve highlighted areas where I can improve.

Your specific points about grammatical errors, American vs. Australian English, and consistency in timing and character details are incredibly helpful. I’ll admit, that juggling all those elements was a challenge, and I may have missed the mark in a few places. Your mention of things like the f-word variations, compound words, and regional language differences has opened my eyes to areas I hadn’t considered fully, and I really appreciate your patience in pointing those out.

I’m glad you enjoyed the story itself, and I’ll be taking your advice as I move forward. I’ve learned so much from this experience and as a young, budding author I am committed to improving my writing.
Thank you again for reading and for helping me grow as an author! Feedback like yours is what drives me to keep learning!

Thanks, Jer'tarme

Jer’tarme,
Wishing you all the best. I will keep an eye out for your next book and look forward to reading it.