Hi Mackenzie Thank you for this thoughtful and detailed review! I'm delighted you connected with the Wolven mind-magic concept and the relationship between Perrin and Bren. Your comparison to Robin Hobb's work is humbling.
I particularly appreciate your feedback about the female characters, as creating strong, well-rounded women in positions of power was a key goal for this series. Your observation about the map's usefulness is also valuable - world-building is so important in fantasy, and I wanted readers to feel grounded in the realm.
Your suggestion about POV distribution is excellent and something I'm actively addressing in the upcoming sequels. The world continues to expand, and balancing character perspectives becomes even more crucial to the storytelling.
Thank you for taking the time to share such constructive feedback. It truly helps shape the development of the series. Shaun Keeley (CSR Keeley)
Thank you for this thoughtful and detailed review!
I'm delighted you connected with the Wolven mind-magic concept and the relationship between Perrin and Bren.
Your comparison to Robin Hobb's work is humbling.
I particularly appreciate your feedback about the female characters, as creating strong, well-rounded women in positions of power was a key goal for this series.
Your observation about the map's usefulness is also valuable - world-building is so important in fantasy, and I wanted readers to feel grounded in the realm.
Your suggestion about POV distribution is excellent and something I'm actively addressing in the upcoming sequels. The world continues to expand, and balancing character perspectives becomes even more crucial to the storytelling.
Thank you for taking the time to share such constructive feedback. It truly helps shape the development of the series.
Shaun Keeley (CSR Keeley)