Hi Lacey, Thank you so much for your thorough and thoughtful review! I've thought about adding the character names to the beginning of chapters in case the POV switches were confusing but worried that would cut down on the sense of immersion within the story. I will absolutely take that into account for future updates to the novel and while working on the sequel!
Thank you so much for your thorough and thoughtful review!
I've thought about adding the character names to the beginning of chapters in case the POV switches were confusing but worried that would cut down on the sense of immersion within the story. I will absolutely take that into account for future updates to the novel and while working on the sequel!