Macee’s review of A Hundred Challenges (Bloodlines Series Book 1) > Likes and Comments

Girl! Your review is honest, and I see exactly where you’re coming from. The story had potential, but all those grammar mistakes? I would have been frustrated too.
The plot itself sounds like a messy and dramatic ride. Spying, enemies with benefits, snooping around. It all sounds entertaining.
You didn’t hate it, the execution just didn’t cut it. And honestly, that’s fair.

@victoria yes! It’s just so weird that this made it so far with no one noticing the errors

Thank you so much for your honesty! It’s my first book and I appreciate your comments. One of the mistakes I made was that I wrote this book in three languages (simultaneously) and I won’t do that again because I drove me to insanity and it made the editing process so difficult! (yes, it was edited) But I’ll run another round of edits to identify the errors you found. 🙌🏻 I think the only way to improve is to be open to criticism, and I’ll be doing my best to polish my work! Thanks!