Honolulu’s review of Discount Dan (Discount Dan's Backroom Bargains #1) > Likes and Comments

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message 1: by James (new)

James Hunter I don't normally make it a habit of commenting on reviews, but I wrote this, not AI. You can go to RoyalRoad and see my posting habits. I've written and published more than forty books since 2015 (long before the rise of AI, mind you) and I wrote Discount Dan chapter by chapter over the course of a year and posted the work on RoyalRoad (including all my typos and rewrites).

You don't have to like it. That's fine. Not every book is for every person. But coming in and claiming something is AI because I used the word Eldritch (a term that rightly applies in the book), is a pretty terrible awful accusation. For any perspective readers, this isn't true. Period.


message 2: by Kamil (new)

Kamil Olszewski So Lovecraft used AI to write his books over a century ago? Got it, makes perfect sense.


message 3: by Jared (new)

Jared Smith This troll comment was definitely written by AI. You can tell by how they used "tale tale" to appear functionally illiterate. As soon as I saw that tenuous grasp on the English language, I lost interest. Good troll comment, I just prefer the ones written by humans.


message 4: by Phillip (new)

Phillip What a bizarre excuse to downvote a work. It sounds like you downvoted without even bothering to read the book. shame on you.


message 5: by Persephone (new)

Persephone Jaeckel This review is ignorant on many levels. Had you done even the smallest amount of research rather than trying to malign a legitimate author to make yourself feel intelligent, you would've known that he not only shares his writing, chapter by chapter, but interacts with his readers frequently. When we make suggestions or edits, he frequently rewrites his material to reflect these changes.
For a supposedly Christian author, you're awfully judgmental. You're also shooting yourself in the foot and driving away future readers with your unsubstantiated negativity. Do better.


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