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message 1: by Krutartha (new)

Krutartha Chitnis I am writing a wild west thriller novel which will take you back to the era when there existed a piece of land where law had its weakest clasp. Gangs, heists, outlaws, gold, pistols, horses, cigarettes and much more to experience. You'll get a chance to immerse yourself in a story that'll keep you glued to your chair and experience every bullet passing by your ear while things get nasty around.

The entire storyline is ready and I've completed writing my first chapter. I am looking for beta readers who are interested to give it a read. This will help me understand if my story is starting with the right pace, tone and creating the immersion I am looking for to pass on to my readers.

Eligibility for applying:
*Have completed at least 5 books in your life
* Have read an action thriller novel before
- Have read a wild west novel before (would be a brownie)
- Can provide me the feedback in 3-4 days

What you will get:
- To read the story before it gets published
- An opportunity to give me recommendations and plot suggestions
- A chance to get an author signed copy for free when published (Paperback)

What I expect from you:
A proper written feedback of minimum 250 words on
- Character development
- World building
- Immersion
- Tone of writing (Balance of exposition and creative writing)
- Overall views on inception of the story
- Does this hook you up for the next chapter?

Please comment me your active email id if you are interested.


message 2: by Bukky (new)

Bukky Grimes I'm interested
bukkygrimes@gmail.com


message 3: by Readchemy (new)

Readchemy Hi there,
Your Wild West thriller concept sounds intense and right up my alley, outlaws, heists, and grit? Count me in. I’ve read several action thrillers and a few westerns, and I enjoy giving focused, constructive feedback. I’d be happy to read your first chapter and provide detailed notes as requested.

You can send the chapter to readchemy2001@gmail.com


message 4: by Krutartha (new)

Krutartha Chitnis Bukky wrote: "I'm interested
bukkygrimes@gmail.com"

Please check your email for the chapter's pdf. I request you to send me an honest feedback considering the above mentioned aspects, in a word file. I expect you to not share the chapter file with anyone else. Thank you.


message 5: by Krutartha (new)

Krutartha Chitnis Readchemy wrote: "Hi there,
Your Wild West thriller concept sounds intense and right up my alley, outlaws, heists, and grit? Count me in. I’ve read several action thrillers and a few westerns, and I enjoy giving foc..."

Please check your email for the chapter's pdf. I request you to send me an honest feedback considering the above mentioned aspects, in a word file. I expect you to not share the chapter file with anyone else. Thank you.


message 6: by Krutartha (new)

Krutartha Chitnis Julie wrote: "Hi krutartha
am interested in beta reading your story and giving you helpful feedback kindly send me a mail catherinejulie31@gmail.com"

Please check your email for the chapter's pdf. I request you to send me an honest feedback considering the above mentioned aspects, in a word file. I expect you to not share the chapter file with anyone else. Thank you.


message 7: by Krutartha (new)

Krutartha Chitnis Sayololuwa wrote: "Krutartha wrote: "I am writing a wild west thriller novel which will take you back to the era when there existed a piece of land where law had its weakest clasp. Gangs, heists, outlaws, gold, pisto..."

Please check your email for the chapter's pdf. I request you to send me an honest feedback considering the above mentioned aspects, in a word file. I expect you to not share the chapter file with anyone else. Thank you.


message 8: by Reader(E) (new)

Reader(E) "Hi! I'm a dedicated beta reader who loves helping authors improve their stories with honest, thoughtful feedback. If you need a fresh perspective on your manuscript, I'm here to help!

send via email readerakin@gmail.com


message 9: by Lizzie (new)

Lizzie Darcie I'd love to beta read your book. You can contact me on
ummeabeeha78@gmail.com or directly from my Fiverr account @lizziedarcie


message 10: by Krutartha (new)

Krutartha Chitnis Thank you so much to everyone who showed interest in reading my first chapter!
Starting now, I’ll be closing beta reader sign-ups for this chapter. I’d like to take some time to go through the feedback I’ve already received and keep the suggestions manageable and focused.
I really appreciate all the support—thank you again!


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