Looking for Beta Readers for my Wild West Thriller Novel (First Chapter) > Likes and Comments

I am writing a wild west thriller novel which will take you back to the era when there existed a piece of land where law had its weakest clasp. Gangs, heists, outlaws, gold, pistols, horses, cigarettes and much more to experience. You'll get a chance to immerse yourself in a story that'll keep you glued to your chair and experience every bullet passing by your ear while things get nasty around.

The entire storyline is ready and I've completed writing my first chapter. I am looking for beta readers who are interested to give it a read. This will help me understand if my story is starting with the right pace, tone and creating the immersion I am looking for to pass on to my readers.

Eligibility for applying:
* Have completed at least 5 books in your life
* Have read an action thriller novel before
- Have read a wild west novel before (would be a brownie)
- Can provide me the feedback in 3-4 days

What you will get:
- To read the story before it gets published
- An opportunity to give me recommendations and plot suggestions
- A chance to get an author signed copy for free when published (Paperback)

What I expect from you:
A proper written feedback of minimum 250 words on
- Character development
- World building
- Immersion
- Tone of writing (Balance of exposition and creative writing)
- Overall views on inception of the story
- Does this hook you up for the next chapter?

Please comment me your active email id if you are interested.

Hi! I'm interested. You can contact at gentlelens129@gmail.com

This sounds exciting! I’ve read plenty of thrillers and a few wild west stories, too. I’d love to help and give honest feedback on the pace, tone, and world you're building. You can send it to readchemy2001@gmail.com.

if you're still interested in beta reader
I will love to help

here is my Gmail readerakin@gmail.com

Thank you so much to everyone who showed interest in reading my first chapter!
Starting now, I’ll be closing beta reader sign-ups for this chapter. I’d like to take some time to go through the feedback I’ve already received and keep the suggestions manageable and focused.
I really appreciate all the support—thank you again!

I'd love to beta read your manuscript. Follow me up folajioluwadarasimi17@gmail.com. If interested

I would love to read your first chapter. Do you still need a beta reader?