Kathleen’s review of Ocean Avenue > Likes and Comments
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Agree with it being hard to follow with the multiple people speaking in the same paragraph.
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Agree with it being hard to follow with the multiple people speaking in the same paragraph.
Thank you so much for the input. I value every review and any constructive criticism. I will keep it in mind when writing in the future.