Thank-you for your honest and direct review. I am very aware this book didn't have the level of polish it needed but only so once writing again and understanding was incomplete this was.
I really expanded the story in it's sequel which has been heavily polished with the fixed perspective the first book should have had. It's called Dead in the South if you want check it out.
I really expanded the story in it's sequel which has been heavily polished with the fixed perspective the first book should have had. It's called Dead in the South if you want check it out.
Thank-you!