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Daniel Wescott Thanks, Charlene. This was my first novel, and you are absolutely right - it could use some serious editing. It did go through three edits (by a professional) but... I think she missed quite a bit. So, I am actually I am mid-rewrite now. This new version will be much more intense and tightly written. The second book to this series, Alien Encounters, is feel is much better than the first book. Still, it had that same editor... so, I will be rewriting it as well. Anyway, thank you for reading my book and leaving a review. I really appreciate that. AND, it makes my day to see that you enjoyed the story even with the narrative issues in this first edition. Thanks again.


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