it is so funny to have read your review for ep3 first and now come back and read these. it kind of feels like a mystery novel!
"it feels like the author is reporting rather than writing" ^ I'M SO GLAD YOU FEEL THIS! this is largely my experience of writing, and i think after Episode 1–which is kind of like tipping your toes into the water, Episode 2 feels like jumping off a cliff into the ocean.
i definitely feel like i hit my stride of bizarre but deeply human writing here! hopefully i can continue to meet/exceed your expectations in future entries as well. thank you always for reading, and thank you again for taking the time to write reviews.
"it feels like the author is reporting rather than writing"
^ I'M SO GLAD YOU FEEL THIS! this is largely my experience of writing, and i think after Episode 1–which is kind of like tipping your toes into the water, Episode 2 feels like jumping off a cliff into the ocean.
i definitely feel like i hit my stride of bizarre but deeply human writing here! hopefully i can continue to meet/exceed your expectations in future entries as well. thank you always for reading, and thank you again for taking the time to write reviews.