Lipp’s review of I Gave You, All I had : A RED DEAD REDEMPTION adaptation (Red Dead Series) > Likes and Comments

Thank you for your honesty. I’m sorry to hear the story didn’t work for you, but I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. Could you let me know what you felt was missing or how it might have been improved? That feedback would be invaluable as I continue working on my writing.

To clarify, I did use AI tools to refine certain parts of the text. I’m still learning and improving as a writer, and constructive feedback like yours helps me grow.

Red Dead Redemption is a game I admire deeply, and it was the inspiration behind this project. While I know the writing isn’t perfect, I’d love to hear whether you found any resemblance between the game’s storytelling and the book.

Thank you again for being the first to leave a review.

Speaking as one writer to another? Dont use AI for refining writing. AI to spellcheck some words? Sure. But to rewrite a text? That’s plagiarizing.
Good on you for having the courage to put something out there—but if you want to write seriously, you need to use your own voice.