Hey Sian! Thanks so much for the review and for taking the time to go into compiling and going into detail on your thoughts regarding the book. Really fantastic insights and I am truly so grateful.
One of the largest challenges when releasing this book was trying to create natural world-building and not dumping any knowledge on you that the characters themselves wouldn't possess. I can see from your experience that maybe I held back a little bit too much where I didn't need to, but I do plan to expand the world further in future installments of the series so I'm really grateful that you intend to return to this world. Thanks again, Sian. :)
One of the largest challenges when releasing this book was trying to create natural world-building and not dumping any knowledge on you that the characters themselves wouldn't possess. I can see from your experience that maybe I held back a little bit too much where I didn't need to, but I do plan to expand the world further in future installments of the series so I'm really grateful that you intend to return to this world. Thanks again, Sian. :)
- Jack