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I just read your post and your story premise sounds really intriguing. I love the mix of psychological tension and character-driven romance. I’m a professional beta reader and enjoy providing structured feedback on pacing, character voice, and clarity, which seems to align with what you’re looking for. Jade and Killian’s perspectives sound complex, and I’d love to help you refine the flow and consistency of the story.
Looking forward to possibly working with you if you’re interested!
Wow, Jade and Killian’s story sounds really intense and layered! I love the psychological tension and the way their conflicting perspectives are set up. The character voices seem strong, especially Jade’s mix of defiance and vulnerability . I can see how that will drive the story. I’d be happy to provide feedback on pacing, clarity, and character consistency if you’re looking for beta readers.
Meg wrote: "Title: The Senators Secret Genre: Dark Romance
Word count: 100k
Status: First full draft, looking for reader impressions before professional editing
Jade — blurb
I left California with nothing..."
Hi, Meg!
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This sounds like a dark, tightly wound setup with a strong dual perspective, the contrast between Jade’s vulnerability and Killian’s control comes through clearly, and the power imbalance feels central rather than just aesthetic. The tone and stakes are very clear for readers who enjoy psychologically intense romance.If you’re still open to reader impressions before moving into professional editing. I’d be happy to beta read and share high-level feedback on pacing, character dynamics, and how the tension lands overall.
Genre: Dark Romance
Word count: 100k
Status: First full draft, looking for reader impressions before professional editing
Jade — blurb
I left California with nothing. My career was gone. My bank account drained. Moving into my sister’s guesthouse wasn’t a choice, it was desperation. Brooke doesn’t want me here. Her fiancé, Senator Killian West, makes it clear he doesn’t either. The man the public applauds isn’t the one I find behind closed doors. He hides behind order, bound to a world built on secrets, violence, and dangerous circles. And once you’re inside, survival comes down to how much of yourself you’re willing to
lose.
Killian — blurb
I don’t feel guilt for the things I’ve done. They gave me power, and I don’t intend to give that up—not for my fiancé, not for anyone. In public, I’m the Senator. The one they trust to keep order. In private, that order is fragile, held together by force of will. Brooke’s sister moved into my house, and Jade is a liability I can’t afford to have. She pushes too close to what I’ve buried, and when she uncovers it, it will take her down with me.
If you like dark, psychological, character-driven romance with twisted power dynamics, I’d love for you to beta read.
Content Warnings:
Manipulation & psychological control
Consensual BDSM elements (punishment, dominance/submission dynamics)
Mentions of rape / past assault (not graphic, not romanticized)
Important Note: This is not a cheating book. There are family and engagement dynamics, but no actual cheating takes place.
What I’m looking for in a Beta: General pacing/flow feedback. Character voice consistency (especially Jade’s defiance vs. vulnerability) Clarity—any confusing scenes, places where you wanted more/less details