Lila’s review of Fated With a Fertility Demon (Running into Fate Book 1) > Likes and Comments
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I thought about reviewing but this says it all. The writing is very confused, but the smut is worth wading through it in places.
Thanks for your review. I apologize for the errors. I did not have the money for an editor, so I tried my best. If you have any in particular you have found of spelling mistakes, I would love to know so I can correct them.
Also, she was born with lavender hair and violet eyes! It was something she had her entire life; it's part of her being clairvoyant and a sign of her powers! Which will be shown later on with her children! Since 2 of her children will have the lavender hair and violet eyes and will also have her same ability. Unless I completely misunderstood your comment about the hair as in you don't know it is just her normal hair because that is not explained. (sorry, I'm autistic so I am just not sure what you exactly mean with the hair)
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Jan 02, 2026 07:59AM
I thought about reviewing but this says it all. The writing is very confused, but the smut is worth wading through it in places.
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Thanks for your review. I apologize for the errors. I did not have the money for an editor, so I tried my best. If you have any in particular you have found of spelling mistakes, I would love to know so I can correct them. Also, she was born with lavender hair and violet eyes! It was something she had her entire life; it's part of her being clairvoyant and a sign of her powers! Which will be shown later on with her children! Since 2 of her children will have the lavender hair and violet eyes and will also have her same ability. Unless I completely misunderstood your comment about the hair as in you don't know it is just her normal hair because that is not explained. (sorry, I'm autistic so I am just not sure what you exactly mean with the hair)
