Hi Tom, thanks for your review. Thank you for your kind and honest comments. You are right that this is an early access preview. As a spoiler alert I can tell you that this wayward man and slave trader over time transformed into a compassionate pastor who cared deeply for his flock and ultimately campaigned to end the slave trade he had been a part of .
As for the final chapter, that is also the first chapter of another book The Traitor Within: Understanding and Healing Our Deceitful Hearts. I’m interested that it didn’t really feel like it fitted for you. I was hoping it would feel like a kind of modern parable verifying Newton’s teaching that the heart is deceitful. Can you give me any advice on how to better integrate it into this volume so it doesn't feel jarring but instead acts as a kind of climax for the book showing just how relevant it is for today? I am sure you know that when the rest of the book is completed anyone with a kindle version now will them be able to simply delete and redownload to get the full version. Are you able to post this review on Amazon?
As for the final chapter, that is also the first chapter of another book The Traitor Within: Understanding and Healing Our Deceitful Hearts. I’m interested that it didn’t really feel like it fitted for you. I was hoping it would feel like a kind of modern parable verifying Newton’s teaching that the heart is deceitful. Can you give me any advice on how to better integrate it into this volume so it doesn't feel jarring but instead acts as a kind of climax for the book showing just how relevant it is for today? I am sure you know that when the rest of the book is completed anyone with a kindle version now will them be able to simply delete and redownload to get the full version. Are you able to post this review on Amazon?