Now we meet Nixie, who is twelve. But Iz and Ronnie shared their first kiss as teens and learned their parents were pregnant in a flashback just before this. So Iz can’t be 32, because Nix would’ve been born when he was 20 then. And the first intimate scene was after graduation, when he was like 18? 19? But the flashback would’ve been before the Camaro, seemed like 14 maybe? Based on the other timeline I’ve already read.
This book needs a developmental editor.