John Scharfenberger’s review of The Rocky Path: A Hot Wife Story (Hotwife Journeys) > Likes and Comments
2 likes · Like
LOL, John That first sentence of your review is amazing and if it was literally true it would have been the funniest one sentence plot spoiler ever written! Some Violet Reins fans are going to think you meant it literally and be disappointed when they read it, though IYKYK
When Abby fucked Sam. in spite of no 'answer' to her question...
Gary jerking off outside the tent,.. is Mr Lee acknowleding that Gary's balls are no longer part of the story.
Matthew Lee has finesse,...
But he's not a big fan of 'hotwife'.
Sharing the wife,.. is not his forte
I was shocked with Sally bends the knee.
Mr Lee's biggest asset.
He knows, better than most of the other writers, that all sex begins between the ears.
It's psychological.
He plays with that, with the readers
LOL
Thank you,..
I 'parsed' that sentence very carefully
MY POINT
If Gary had been in the room,..
part of the Abby/Earl party. after the first night,.
If Mikail had walked into the bedroom to find Gary sitting on the edge of the bed on night one.
would those changes have made the sex more subdued???
I don't think so,
and Gary would have had a great deal more respect.
Instead, Mr Lee structured it to emasculate him as much as possible.
TO NO FUCKING PURPOSE!!!!!!!!
It wouldn't be so noticeable if it wasn't so consistent
FACT
Mr Lee doesn't know how to capitolize on having hubby in the room watching wife get fucked,..
don't believe???
Read Molly Pike,..
First Time Blacked:.....
Hotwife
Cabin
Honeymoon.
The heat of having wife talk to, kiss, play with husband,...
while a bull is fucking her,..
Mr Lee doesn't know how to pull that off
The first sentence also grabbed my attention, but even I didn't include that subject in my hotwife book 🤭
LOL
You might want to consider that
Think of the 'bull' as an outside contractor, working in tandem with hubby.
LOL
There are a lot of hot possibilities, that aren't covered with the MFM combination that many writers don't consider
Did you see my request for stories in the review for "Honeymoon Sweet"?
Since you dabble more in Fem-dom,... you might run across that scenario more frequently than most others.
back to top
date
newest »
newest »
message 1:
by
Chuck
(new)
Feb 20, 2026 01:24PM
LOL, John That first sentence of your review is amazing and if it was literally true it would have been the funniest one sentence plot spoiler ever written! Some Violet Reins fans are going to think you meant it literally and be disappointed when they read it, though IYKYK
reply
|
flag
When Abby fucked Sam. in spite of no 'answer' to her question...Gary jerking off outside the tent,.. is Mr Lee acknowleding that Gary's balls are no longer part of the story.
Matthew Lee has finesse,...But he's not a big fan of 'hotwife'.
Sharing the wife,.. is not his forte
I was shocked with Sally bends the knee.
Mr Lee's biggest asset.He knows, better than most of the other writers, that all sex begins between the ears.
It's psychological.
He plays with that, with the readers
LOLThank you,..
I 'parsed' that sentence very carefully
MY POINTIf Gary had been in the room,..
part of the Abby/Earl party. after the first night,.
If Mikail had walked into the bedroom to find Gary sitting on the edge of the bed on night one.
would those changes have made the sex more subdued???
I don't think so,
and Gary would have had a great deal more respect.
Instead, Mr Lee structured it to emasculate him as much as possible.
TO NO FUCKING PURPOSE!!!!!!!!
It wouldn't be so noticeable if it wasn't so consistent
FACTMr Lee doesn't know how to capitolize on having hubby in the room watching wife get fucked,..
don't believe???
Read Molly Pike,..
First Time Blacked:.....
Hotwife
Cabin
Honeymoon.
The heat of having wife talk to, kiss, play with husband,...
while a bull is fucking her,..
Mr Lee doesn't know how to pull that off
The first sentence also grabbed my attention, but even I didn't include that subject in my hotwife book 🤭
LOLYou might want to consider that
Think of the 'bull' as an outside contractor, working in tandem with hubby. LOL
There are a lot of hot possibilities, that aren't covered with the MFM combination that many writers don't consider
Did you see my request for stories in the review for "Honeymoon Sweet"?Since you dabble more in Fem-dom,... you might run across that scenario more frequently than most others.
