Dear Stevie, Thank you for taking the time to read Embalmed Shadows and for sharing your thoughts. The repetition was very much intentional — meant to mirror decay, ritual, and the claustrophobic spiral of the protagonist’s mind — but I understand that approach doesn’t resonate with everyone. If you ever feel inclined to try something different from me, The Bitch of Buchenwald moves in a far harsher, more historical direction, with a very different rhythm and structure. Either way, I appreciate you giving my work a chance. Best regards Jack
Thank you for taking the time to read Embalmed Shadows and for sharing your thoughts. The repetition was very much intentional — meant to mirror decay, ritual, and the claustrophobic spiral of the protagonist’s mind — but I understand that approach doesn’t resonate with everyone. If you ever feel inclined to try something different from me, The Bitch of Buchenwald moves in a far harsher, more historical direction, with a very different rhythm and structure. Either way, I appreciate you giving my work a chance. Best regards Jack