Jennifer’s review of Dragon and Culverin (The Gray Sparrow #1) > Likes and Comments
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Thank you so much for this thoughtful and detailed feedback—and for still enjoying the story despite its flaws. You’re absolutely right about the need for a solid edit, and I really appreciate you pointing out specific inconsistencies. I’m actively working on a deep edit to smooth out the grammar, tighten the language, and track all those character and object threads so they stay consistent. Thanks again for taking the time to write this out—it genuinely helps, and I’m really glad the heart of the story still came through for you.
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Mar 08, 2026 12:28AM
Thank you so much for this thoughtful and detailed feedback—and for still enjoying the story despite its flaws. You’re absolutely right about the need for a solid edit, and I really appreciate you pointing out specific inconsistencies. I’m actively working on a deep edit to smooth out the grammar, tighten the language, and track all those character and object threads so they stay consistent. Thanks again for taking the time to write this out—it genuinely helps, and I’m really glad the heart of the story still came through for you.
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