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message 1: by Saengard (new)

Saengard Thank you for reading! So, you don't like a book series? This story is a complete stand-alone book with only one hanging thread to be picked up in book 2. How could I have communicated this is going to be a series better? Was it just the words "To be continued" that you didn't like, or was it something else?
Do you have any thoughts on the rest of the book? Was it interesting, kept you engaged? Would love to hear from you! Thanks again for trying out my book!


message 2: by Ray (new)

Ray It definitely did not seem like a standalone novel. And I did not like the to be continued line, I like to continue with a series because I want to. Not because I feel I'm being forced to. It sure seemed like the latter to me.
I've read several books since finishing it and don't really remember exactly how it ended. But, I would suggest make your endings more clear cut. Leave the reader more choice.


message 3: by Saengard (new)

Saengard Ah. Thanks for the feedback. Sorry that it seemed like a continuation felt forced. I'd hoped that I had concluded nearly every arc except one. I will look at the end again to see if I can find a way to approach it differently.


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