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Hey everyone, hope you are all well - just wanted to share I've release a brand new 3-book series (Crossing the Line) that is heavy on interracial hotwife/cuckolding themes. If humiliation, cuckold training, cleanup, and breeding kinks are your thing this series is for you. Would love for you to check it out and leave an honest review on Amazon or here (or both) if you're so inclined. Thanks!

Series page: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GTBB4XRX?...

Crossing The Line: A Husband Discovers His Wife’s Sordid Past and Encourages a Taboo Affair

Crossing The Line: A Husband Discovers His Wife’s Sordid Past and Encourages a Taboo Affair

Have you discovered the Molly Pike First Time Blacked series?
There are forty six, (so far) in it.
she is very prolific, so that number changes often

She specializes in Sexual destruction
I would recommend the trilogy she just updated two days ago
Calabasas, Watts. and the final RM 1204

It's hard to believe that this girl is a Sophomore (Northwestern)
She's specializing in English Composition.

for a shorty,.. try FTB Playdate. short, sweet, and very hot

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...

John Scharfenberger wrote: "Have you discovered the Molly Pike First Time Blacked series?
There are forty sex, (so far) in it.
she is very prolific, so that number changes often

She specializes in Sexual destruction
I would ..."

Awesome, haven't checked that out yet. Thanks for the rec, definitely will put it on the list!

I have some favorites.
I've bought ten of them

playdate is a single
Collateral - Broken is a bookend pair
PlayDate - Study Date - Double Date is a Senators' Daughter
Bride, marrige honeymoon is another triple
These are the ones I've bought.

enjoy

OMG
You're the guy i ripped into
sorry,..
My reviews,.. i call em like i see em.
i got in that habit on Literotica.

I have some short stories I want a writer to continue.
(free ideas)
I was an editor for a young lady on Literotica since 2019
She passed from Covid in Dec 2020
Her sister asked me to 'finish her work,... keep the characters 'alive'
I'm not that good a writer.
but,..
i'm looking for someone to look them over.
Her name was Kelly Lovall on Literotica
Katy published her final effort from her computer (unfinished)
My name is on the attribution page John S.
Katy is the one who blessed using Kelly's work.

John Scharfenberger wrote: "OMG
You're the guy i ripped into
sorry,..
My reviews,.. i call em like i see em.
i got in that habit on Literotica.

I have some short stories I want a writer to continue.
(free ideas)
I was an edi..."

All good -- thanks for the honest feedback, John.

I have a question. How do you write sex scenes and have it sound good. Ive been trying to write one and it just sounds weird and it doesnt work. does anyone have any tips on how I can make it sound better??

I think it takes practice, just doing it over and over again. But also read popular stuff in the niche you want to write it and try to imitate it. That's the best place to start.

F. wrote: "I think it takes practice, just doing it over and over again. But also read popular stuff in the niche you want to write it and try to imitate it. That's the best place to start."

Ok Thank you!!! <3 ive tried a lot of stuff but its giving sucky fanfiction. Yk?

From my experience as a reader (and editor),..
Take your time.
If it's a quickie against the wall,.. or over the sofa back,..it can be brief,
but

if it's a long romantinc interlude,.. TAKE YOUR TIME!!!
give it detail, time, and eroticism. (not to mention nasty)

If it takes twenty pages to make all that happen,,,,
so be it.

thanks, I will take a look at your first book next week (have to budget my cuckold literature buys!

I personally prefer Stag-vixen

I posted three sequential tales on the bookshelf. Sloan is a sex addict.
Richard appears to be a cuckold,... but don't be too quick to push him into that pigeon hole.

there are more coming from this couple,...

GPAC are these scenes up to par?

Gpac_11 wrote: "I have a question. How do you write sex scenes and have it sound good. Ive been trying to write one and it just sounds weird and it doesnt work. does anyone have any tips on how I can make it sound..."

Find a writer that you enjoy. Watch the way they 'build' the encounter.
do you like the intensity? Does it sound real? Does it FEEL real?
then watch that writer do a number of things,..
How the choreography plays,..
Then, take notes and apply them when you try to write.

I work with two beautifully perverted lady writers
Peaches Dean and Molly Pike.
they impressed me and they're both growing every month,
they're both young.

Watch the technique
Peaches Deans,.. Anniversary Gift

Molly Pike's FTB Install.

They are both amazing

F. wrote: "I think it takes practice, just doing it over and over again. But also read popular stuff in the niche you want to write it and try to imitate it. That's the best place to start."

repitition,,, without constructive,,,, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, doesn't yield any change,.. there is no impetus to bring about improvement.

just like a musician,.. it takes a bit of criticism to polish the sound.
A fresh set of eyes to give feedback
without that,.. there's no movement